This week in English, the children have been learning about senses poetry. They have been thinking about similes and adjectives to add descriptive detail to their work. We have taken inspiration from our world as this fits perfectly with our current IPC topic. The children have written their own poems which you can find below.
I am very impressed with all of the children and their effort to create their own poems.
Sophia
Our World
I feel sand
as soft as fur.
I feel the
wet water.
I see the
clouds.
I see the
bright sun.
I smell
delicious fish and chips.
I smell
sausages.
I hear the
waves.
I hear
splashes.
Will
Our World
I see a dark
night as dark as coal.
I see long
birds flying over my head as tall as a tree.
I see a red
fox as red as an apple.
I see snow
as white as a polar bear.
I see a tree
as tall as a mountain range.
I see a
squirrel in the snow.
I see a dark
bird in the snow.
I see a
majestic deer.
Darcie
Our World
I see Big
Ben.
I see the
Houses of Parliament.
I see fast
boats on the river.
I see people
walking in the snow.
I see big
red buses.
I see
massive hotels.
I see big
lights.
I see the
massive buildings.
I see the
nice cars.
Louisa
Our World
I see a
field as beautiful as a patchwork quilt.
I see a
fluffy cloud as white as snow.
I see the
sun rising as wonderful as a picture.
I see houses
as pretty as a golden block.
I see the
sunset as orange as an orange.
I see a wave
as big as a blue whale.
I see a tree
as big and as wobbly as a witch’s hat.
Roxi
Our World
I see
amazing swings.
I see trees
as tall as a giant.
I see a dog
as cute as a person.
I see a
train as long as a snake.
I can see
fluffy clouds as white as the snow.
I can see a
car zooming as fast as a racing car.
I can see a
house as tall as a tree.
I see a leaf
as green as the grass.
I see an
enormous crash outside my house.
I see a huge
fire it’s so red, yellow and blue.
I see a
sleigh fly past my window. It is as bright as Rudolph’s nose.
Grace
Our World
I see pretty
seashells.
I see some
noisy, greedy seagulls.
I see a
wonderful tall tree growing.
I see fluffy
clouds as lights as a feather.
I see snow
as white as toothpaste.
I see
flowers as small as a snail.
I see the
sunset as bright as a sunflower.
I see a
rainbow as bright as the sun.
I see an owl
as brown as a log.
I see a
black pen as black as the sky.
I see
bright, gold earrings as bright as gold.
I see
buildings as big as a giant.
I see a
mouldy old shell as smelly as rotten eggs.
Darcey-Rue
Our World
I see a big
white shooting star.
I hear a big
white airplane.
I see a tall
dragon as green as the grass.
I see white
fluffy ice as white as the clouds.
I can see
fluffy white snow.
I can see
wing blowing as hard as a tree.
I can see a
tree as tall as a mountain.
Abigail
Our World
I see big,
blue waves as tall as a tree.
I hear birds
cheeping in the sky like a beautiful choir.
I touched
the shiny, yellow sand which was as bright as a gem.
I smell
yummy ice cream as red as a rose.
I see clouds
a white as snow.
I hear big
grown ups as loud as thunder.
I touched
the soft, green grass which was as soft as marshmallows.
I smell
brown bacon. It smells as hot as fire.
Amélie
Our World
I see the
beautiful, magical sunset going past me like a winter wonderland.
I hear the
whooshing of the shimmering, sparkling, blue ocean like the twinkling of the
bells saying Christmas is here.
I smell the
smell of freezing, lovely strawberry ice cream like the fresh snow just fallen
from the sky.
I see a
brown, wonky palm tree as tall as a mountain.
Matty
Our World
I hear
cheeping, tweeting birds like a chuckling baby.
I hear
crunchy, crumpling leaves.
I hear a
gigantic, nasty storm like a snow storm.
I hear
noisy, gigantic boulders rolling down the hill.
I hear
shaky, quiet trees.
Gideon
Our World
I see a big
brown owl as big as a tree.
I see a long
bird as big as a ship.
I see a big,
strong guerrilla as big as a bus.
I see a big
tree standing as tall as a mountain.
I see a
small tree as small as a snowflake.
I see snow
as thick as a tree.
I see trees
as white as snow.
I see a
piece of ice as clear as glass.
Flossie
Our World
I see a
beautiful butterfly flying as quietly as a mouse.
I see green
pretty grass growing all the time.
I see
wonderful bees making honey with their family.
I see clouds
as white as snow.
I see trees
with no leaves on them.
I see snow
falling from the sky.
I see ice
all over the floor.
I see bushes
getting snowed on.
I see trees
that are all bendy.
I see trees
and bushes with icicles on them.
I see
gigantic trees.
Evie
Our World
I see a huge
wave taller than me.
I see a
great magical sand castle.
I smell the
salty fish and chips.
I see the
sky as blue as the sea.
I taste the
yucky sea water in my mouth.
I see the
trees in the distance as tall as mountains.
I see the
sunset as beautiful as a sunflower.
Year 2
Shared Writing
Our World
I see a
brown, wavy tree standing as tall as a mountain.
I see
beautiful, green fields stretched out like a patchwork quilt.
I see
wonderful, fluttery butterflies flying past as quietly as a shooting star.
I see a
pretty, golden sunset as bright as a sunflower.